I’m not sure what he needs. Maybe a beak, or maybe more elongation/ballooning of the head. But right now, he’s looking more cthuloid than octopoid. Definitely rather grumpy, but if someone were holding me up by the back of the head I’d be grumpy too.
But it’s ok. If he comes out looking too eldritch-horrorish, I can always mount him to a wooden plaque and call him a trophy head.
Sorry if anyone gets this twice, by the way. I broke Wordbooker somehow and am kludgingly trying to get it to work again.